P is for Paawan
Paawan.
He traced the name delicately in his diary.He wanted to add a syllable to it. I.
And then he could be Paawani.
"Paawan," he heard his mother call out. The pen slipped from his hand. His heart thumped and he quickly closed his diary, "Yes Ma."
Paawan.
He traced the name delicately in his diary.He wanted to add a syllable to it. I.
And then he could be Paawani.
"Paawan," he heard his mother call out. The pen slipped from his hand. His heart thumped and he quickly closed his diary, "Yes Ma."
15 comments:
Hmm..it's not easy to alter, is it? Even if it is the most imporatant I.
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Dear me! Such a wonderful way of presenting him. Hope she understands her son.
Such a tragedy. I hope we have the courage to accept people as they are. Or so many will never be able to come out of their entrapments.
@ Nisha its more about accepting who you are
@ Srivalli I so hope she does. Thank you
@ Sonia Isn`t it ? We live in hope..
Wow! what an impact packed in just a few lines. Brilliant.
Hope he find the courage he needs to add that 'I'.
Hope he finds the courage to accept himself
I had to read this thrice to understand the deeper meaning.
Once I understood it, it was so powerful!! Silly me.
Short, beautiful and thought-provoking.
Cheers,
CRD
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@ Arti I hope so too
@Ira IYes. Only then will he find the courage to add that I.
@ CRD Thrice ? I need to work on clarity then. Glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by :-)
Awww my heart goes out to him. May he have the courage to express his true self one day!
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What a lovely, lovely post! What an awesome point made in so few words!
@ Noor..I too hope he accepts himself
@HDWK Thank you :-)
It is so hard for Paawan to be honest....u don’t know how ur near and dear ones wil react! Arti u are a genius.....in a few lines you said it all!
@ Preeti Yes preeti it is very difficult...Glad you liked it
A well-written story! Reality, I must say. Hope all turns out well in the self-discovery process of Paawani
@ Srishti Thank you. I pray so too
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