Baatein hain bahut si ,
Par kissi se kehne ko ji nahi karta.
Ajab se mod par hain zindagi ,
Par kadam uthane ko ji nahi karta.
Jaanti hoon ,tum ho paas
Phir bhi ,haath badhane ko ji nahi karta.
Kya yahi hai Zindagi ?
Jawab jann ne ko bhi , ji nahi karta.
10 comments:
woaw.. and does that describe the reason for your long absence too??
thats a very moody poem!lol
koi baat nahi...its just a phase :)
Let the heart take its time, let the hand take its time,,,
if it is love, they will find their own way to reach the destination.
very beautifully written...
so beautiful!
It is a reaction of the surrounding that engulfes all of us. We expect some reaction for the action we do. Good or bad laugh or tears we wait for it but Ji nehi karta when the reaction is neutral.
A beautiful moment although bitter and sour but thanks we shared it. You wrote what many of us felt but never wrote about it.
Is post par comment karna chahti hun...
par kuch likhney ko ji nahi karta
sochti hun tumhey daantun
par kuch bolne ko jee nahi karta...
well written bhen...but make it longer pls...you can write a much longer one than this...
What happened? Such sullenness can't be good.
very nicely done!!
Jab man kare, sab kar lena.. :-)
@Iya..hmmm
@Nisha...yep i know it is...
@Mampi :-)
@Aneri..thank u ji
@Pradip..hmm not really..one looses interest for various reasons..
@DD..Jaanti hu bahut kuch hai kehne ko, par sab likhne ko ji nahi karta!!
@D..i know par kabhi kabhi chup rehne se apne aap ko samajhne ka mauka milta hai..
@HDWK...Thank u ji for ur understanding...m sure phase hai par kya kare sach mein likhne ya padne ko bhi ji nahi karta...
Ye kaisa Ji hai ji ?
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