M is for marriage
Peaches and cream is what he wanted
Coffee and chocolate is what he got.
He kicked and shoved and pushed
The bruises healed but the scars remained.
Peaches and cream is what he wanted
Coffee and chocolate is what he got.
He kicked and shoved and pushed
The bruises healed but the scars remained.
28 comments:
I feel scared just reading about relationships like that..
Wow this is such an awesome piece... Just a few chosen words and that speaks volumes and puts across so nicely what you wanted to convey :)...simply beautiful!!
The scars will also vanish with time :)
@ nisha yes they are scary but real
@ Ira I hope they heal..
The brutality of this life!
They say time heals. Does it? Maybe they talk about bruises.
@ Srivalli It is scary
@ Sonia Bruises may heal but not the scars
Brutal. Real. Time to change the narrative, I feel. Don't you think?
@ Arti yea..for her..yes
Peaches & cream...coffee & chocolate...the visual impact of such metaphors.
@ CRD It can be a cruel world...Thank you for dropping by
Holy S^&t! But so good to see a post from you! This is gooood writing. The kind of writing that i have been missing big time.
@ hdwk Good to see you hear :-) Long long long time
I really liked this one! Deep.
Oh God! You have said so much in such a few words. A poignant one!
Lot said in such few words.
Ouch. This is so so sad. I know that a person's skin colour often determines their desirability in this country, but it is so so sad to see it.
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Few lines but very deep meaning.
Gave me goosebumps
@Vidya Thank you
@Vartika Thanks
@Princely Thanks
@Noor It is terrible!
@Jayashree Thanks
Some of the most powerful stories comes with little words. Just like this one.
Thank you Parul
DAMN.
Damn... This was painful. Realistic too.
This is sad reality of our double faced society.
Damn... what a hard-hitting well written post. It's so common as well. The scars never heal actually and leave a mark like never before.
Damn... what a hard-hitting well-written post. It's so common as well. The scars never heal actually and leave a mark like never before.
What a realistic and hard-hitting piece!! The scars never heal actually and leave an indelible mark.
Oh this was so sad. You explained a sad marriage in few words.
Atrocious! Still, people judge others with their looks, when will this change?
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