Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Ji Nahi Karta

Baatein hain bahut si ,

Par kissi se kehne ko ji nahi karta.

Ajab se mod par hain zindagi ,

Par kadam uthane ko ji nahi karta.

Jaanti hoon ,tum ho paas

Phir bhi ,haath badhane ko ji nahi karta.

Kya yahi hai Zindagi ?

Jawab jann ne ko bhi , ji nahi karta.

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10 comments:

  1. IyaApril 8, 2009 at 10:35 PM

    woaw.. and does that describe the reason for your long absence too??

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  2. NishaApril 8, 2009 at 10:36 PM

    thats a very moody poem!lol
    koi baat nahi...its just a phase :)

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  3. MampiApril 8, 2009 at 11:37 PM

    Let the heart take its time, let the hand take its time,,,
    if it is love, they will find their own way to reach the destination.

    very beautifully written...

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  4. aneri_masiApril 8, 2009 at 11:42 PM

    so beautiful!

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  5. pradipwritenowApril 9, 2009 at 10:56 AM

    It is a reaction of the surrounding that engulfes all of us. We expect some reaction for the action we do. Good or bad laugh or tears we wait for it but Ji nehi karta when the reaction is neutral.
    A beautiful moment although bitter and sour but thanks we shared it. You wrote what many of us felt but never wrote about it.

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  6. DeeplyDipApril 9, 2009 at 12:50 PM

    Is post par comment karna chahti hun...
    par kuch likhney ko ji nahi karta

    sochti hun tumhey daantun
    par kuch bolne ko jee nahi karta...

    well written bhen...but make it longer pls...you can write a much longer one than this...

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  7. DApril 9, 2009 at 1:56 PM

    What happened? Such sullenness can't be good.

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  8. How do we knowApril 9, 2009 at 5:11 PM

    very nicely done!!
    Jab man kare, sab kar lena.. :-)

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  9. my spaceApril 13, 2009 at 9:18 PM

    @Iya..hmmm
    @Nisha...yep i know it is...
    @Mampi :-)
    @Aneri..thank u ji
    @Pradip..hmm not really..one looses interest for various reasons..
    @DD..Jaanti hu bahut kuch hai kehne ko, par sab likhne ko ji nahi karta!!
    @D..i know par kabhi kabhi chup rehne se apne aap ko samajhne ka mauka milta hai..
    @HDWK...Thank u ji for ur understanding...m sure phase hai par kya kare sach mein likhne ya padne ko bhi ji nahi karta...

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  10. Manish RajApril 26, 2009 at 4:45 PM

    Ye kaisa Ji hai ji ?

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