Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Saloni

S is for Saloni


The Bin

Have you seen the big shiny bin  on the sidewalk?
Full of filth and crap .
The stink is gagging me.
It has to be emptied.

There comes the garbage van.


Dedicated to my late husband Sahil.
                                  From  Love and Life By Saloni.

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9 comments:

  1. ArtiApril 22, 2020 at 9:36 PM

    Numbing and hard hitting lines. They have a haunting quality to them.

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  2. Sonia DograApril 23, 2020 at 12:06 AM

    Okay. Do I smell something fishy here?

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  3. Ira MishraApril 23, 2020 at 2:32 AM

    Sorry, I didn't get the crux of this short tale :| Would love to know what is it about.

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  4. my spaceApril 23, 2020 at 9:13 AM

    @ Arti Thank you Arti

    @ Sonia Very

    @Ira Relationship

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  5. ShwetaApril 23, 2020 at 12:56 PM

    Something that can seem fresh and happy on the outside but is anything but! Beautifully written.

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  6. Srivalli RekhaApril 23, 2020 at 5:51 PM

    My! That packed quite a punch. :D

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  7. my spaceApril 23, 2020 at 7:18 PM

    @ Shweta sigh! The reality of life

    @ Srivalli Thank you :-)

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  8. Ira MishraApril 24, 2020 at 4:25 AM

    Oh so I did get it then... It's just the dedicated to followed by love and life part that I got a bit unsure about my understanding :)

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  9. Prakash HegadeApril 25, 2020 at 12:13 AM

    oh! I am paused!

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